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Unlikeable Villains

Writing a Hateable Villain

Creating a villain that everyone loves to hate is a fun challenge for any writer! Here are some friendly tips to help you whip up those detestable antagonists that audiences will love to despise.
Written by Kevin Barrett  |  Updated
August 6, 2024

Creating a villain that everyone loves to hate is a fun challenge for any writer! Here are some friendly tips to help you whip up those detestable antagonists that audiences will love to despise.

  • Get to know your villain: To make your villain believable, dig into their motivations and backstory. A strong motive gives your villain depth, making them relatable—even if the audience doesn't agree with their choices.
  • Craft memorable a personality: Your villain should be unforgettable, Give them a unique personality that stands out, ensuring they’re as memorable as they are hated.
  • Generate conflict: Build conflicts and moral dilemmas that test your hero. Each clash makes the audience’s dislike for the villain grow, adding to their villainous charm.
  • Showcase consequences: Let’s face it—actions have consequences. Show how your villain’s deeds create havoc; this makes their evil nature crystal clear.
  • Craft effective dialogue: Dialogue is key! Use sharp, menacing lines and eerie exchanges that reveal your villain’s true colors, making them feel real and utterly detestable.
  • Add complexity: Give your villain some layers. Incorporate redeeming qualities or sympathetic traits to add complexity, making them more intriguing and, yes, hateable.
  • Potent actions - the Kick-The-Dog moment: Nothing screams “bad guy” like a villain harming or intimidating a lovable character. This classic ‘kick the dog’ moment paints a clear picture of their wickedness.
  • Unforgivable behavior: Ramp up your villain’s selfishness and moral disregard to make their actions absolutely unforgivable. The more they cross the line, the more the audience will relish in their despicable nature.
  • Avoid likability: Keep your villain charmingly unlikable. Skip the funny or lovable traits that could undermine their mean streak—remember, we’re going for detestable!
  • Flaunt unearned power: Give your villain power they didn’t earn. This makes them feel unworthy and ramps up the audience’s resentment. An audience loves to root against the undeserved!
  • Delivering comeuppance: Finally, make sure your villain gets their just desserts! A satisfying comeuppance gives everyone that warm, fuzzy feeling of justice, leaving audiences feeling fulfilled.

So, take a cue from those memorable villains in media, and remember: even the most loathsome villains deserve to be well-rounded characters. We might love to hate them, but they play an essential role in the stories we can't get enough of!

Kevin from StoryFlint

Hello friends! I'm Kevin, the creator of StoryFlint. I love the science of storytelling and learning how to create compelling characters, plots, themes and worlds. I've helped thousands of writers gain clarity with their stories through content and Notion templates.

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